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A visual synopsis of life at it's most sceptical.
A visual synopsis of life at it's most sceptical.
i like the concept, alot, how ever
ReplyDeletetwo main issues to me (both falling under the umbrella of readability)
1,do the bricks read as bricks? they are so small and such inconsistent shapes that, if i had not been told they were bricks i might notve guessed and then the whole point of it is lost. theyre even harder to see against the dark red
2, always bear in mind composition and focal point its so important especially if the piece has detail and is kinda busy like this,. theres got to be a heirarchy, but the way youve applied red to the face broadly means every part is shouting for attention which makes the whole thing less interesting than if one bit was more prominent.